Hey guys,
Just finished the blocking phase of my short and I need some critique. Rip it apart. I would love to see what you guys have to say. Any comments are welcome from story to camera to editing to animation. I'm gonna post it on youtube for now but I'll update my website as things progress. Thanks!
I don't know what's going on till he gets the instant message. Who is that guy that drops off the papers? Is he the boss? A co-worker? What are those papers? I'm guessing it's more work. Is he giving the fingers to that guy that just left or to his computer? Why is he there so late? Is he working or is he just hanging out waiting to IM porn to women? It looks like he just sleeps after work.
The whole begining is cloudy. After that things are more clear.
Aloha,
the Ape
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