hi, recently i made a little flash intro for my schools art department website, wouldnt mind hearing some "constructive" comments.
p.s be easy on me, im only 15 :)
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hi, recently i made a little flash intro for my schools art department website, wouldnt mind hearing some "constructive" comments.
p.s be easy on me, im only 15 :)
right click and select "save target as" here
cheers
15?! I'm impressed!
There are a couple of things you may want to look at, however. The tilt of the text doesn't match the tilt of the page. I didn't notice it until your name appeared, which does follow the angle of the page. I think you should change 1 or the other. I also think you need to change the timing and location of how your name appears. It seems to pop up really fast compared to the rest of the text, which I found to be distracting, and you may want to move it to the bottom of the page.
Other than those minor changes, I think it's pretty good! ;)
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yeh what iwa s gonna do was just have it fade pretty quickly in, but i never really got round to it. and as for the angles, i jsut kinda guessed them so they do look a bit off. thanks alot for the input though, i know what i got to change now :P
jsut thought id update with the latest/final one. thanks.
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Glad I could help. The alignment looks much better.
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