Oookey. This is the barebones of the first scene. I just want to know if it reads well, if it works. Your opinion would be spectacular.
http://www.geocities.com/sherbalex/movie.html
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Oookey. This is the barebones of the first scene. I just want to know if it reads well, if it works. Your opinion would be spectacular.
http://www.geocities.com/sherbalex/movie.html
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Yeah. More! Still truckin' along here.
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Rip it apart. You know you want to. Also since its Geocities, my bandwidth for the 'mo might be slaughtered. Check back later if it is.
edit: also after it goes white and stuff, theres till s'more at the very end. cheerio!
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www.geocities.com/sherbalex/movie.html
S'more added. Criticize the shit out of it, if it would please you.
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hehe, i like it :)
a bit over dramatic don't ya think? :P
try add backgrounds insted of white void
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After Satan talks your lip sink is a little off
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I disagree. Not about the second phase of lip-syncs, that needs to be corrected (I mean it works but it's distracting). But the overaction is what gives it "character" (no pun intended). Plus the way the inquisitive first character speaks...the voice I mean...is dead on the voice I would expect from that figure.
If I had to make any real critique I'd say move Satan a bit more, because he's so giant and powerful but he has this enormous -static- torso. He'd be more ominous and his weight would be easier to read probably too. As it stands he's actually much more humorous than the other guy, and the "you must DIE" is actually charming. It looks like "shucks!"
Awesome work. I'd watch your stuff, because it has a good interpretation of the soundtrack and contrasts well back and forth between sharp and loose movements.