Please comment on this animated short

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Please comment on this animated short

We did this animated short to test the ability and defects of a newly formed animator group. Please comment.

http://www.prestostudio.com/Anim.wmv

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Pain is inevitable; suffering is optional. www.prestostudio.com debjit at prestostudio dot com

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Its is a nice animation overall. But there are some things I'm not to keen on, like the speed of the animation, it is to slow in my opinion. Other than that, good work.

spudmania.com - coming soon.

trippy.......

thanks reala........

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debjit at prestostudio dot com

I thought it was rather sweet and unaffected...like some first attempts.

To me it was pretty obvious of why it was called a frog's umbrella from the opening prologue, no mystery. ANd I don't no the motivation of the lizard? Becasue the frog was snoring?

This may be inexperience in animation or stoytelling or it may a be a cultural differnece added to that in how our expressions, humour and storytelling may be different.

Animation and design were good for a first and will get better with time.