Time Machine Part 2! FEEDBACK please!

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Time Machine Part 2! FEEDBACK please!

Hey there,
Part 2 of "Lucky Bob's Time Machine" is now finished! Please tell me what you think!

http://webzoom.freewebs.com/jtn1989/Part%202%20%28web%29.mov

Spoooze!

P.S.
Don't worry, it will get BETTER both animation and story wise.

I actually like him^^

lol me too. I'm trying to decide wether to use him again...
Spoooze!

It's funny :D.....

The scenes are great,and there are good amount of facial expressions for each character. My problem is when "stinky" shouts out the main character, he gets blow away just a little too early? And the audio sounds kind rough, between each dialogu, I guess you could use slightly audio fade-in and fade-out..^^

Glad you liked it :D
I can probably fix the shouting part and the audio.

Spoooze!

P.S.
Did you catch my little Matrix reference?

Talking about Mr "stinky" :D ?~~

I actually like him^^