Hey these are 2 of my 10 second animations that I had done...
http://www.abhimation.com/moush/7203.mpg
http://www.cgtantra.com//forum/uploads/abhishek/avatars/7203.mpg
Please feel free to critique them....
Thanx :)
Hey these are 2 of my 10 second animations that I had done...
http://www.abhimation.com/moush/7203.mpg
http://www.cgtantra.com//forum/uploads/abhishek/avatars/7203.mpg
Please feel free to critique them....
Thanx :)
Hi moush,
I watched your first clip, and I think you're on the right track. My only suggestion would be to minimize the side-to-side head motions (when he says "that rob and steal, and cheat"). It looks a little wild. The last part however, (when he shakes his head and sits up) is magnificent!
Sincerely,
Pooryorik
I took a look at the first one as well and what I noticed is that things are timed the same, meaning the head motion and hand motion from side to side are synced up perfectly, I would try to offset this and lead with the hands or lead with the head and let the hands catch up, this gives alot of extra life to a character.
Keep it up!
Don
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I...don't know, your work could have been a lot better, I mean, were you having a bad day? You have the potential, it just didn't show in this one.:(
He who seeks the truth, must first empty his heart of a false pursuit.
Diemeras Dark Angel
For some reason I could not see your second clip, but your first clip I though was fine. I can only see these clips at the local cyber cafe, I can not watch the clip while I write this.
DDA, I think he was looking more for constructive criticism. What specifically is dragging it down in terms of technical proficiency that would give it added life or polish?