El cazador

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El cazador

I just uploaded my first (at least as an adult) animation. It´s called "El cazador" (the hunter). Feedback wellcome!

The URL is:

http://hterri.googlepages.com/Elcazador.wmv

Cheers,

Hernan

Nice. I like the style.
It's just that the man's facial expressions barely change... we tend to look at a character's face during the animation and if it doesn't change... well I think you should have facial expressions.
Oh and I think you should study archery because archers don't shoot like that. The arrow would have hit the ground a few feet from him if he shot that way.
There also seems to be some problem when the man's hand goes over the leg.
I really like the dog though!:D
Go little doggie!:D

I like the cut-out style you have used, it has a charm. How did you do that?

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Heathen,

Thanks for your comments, I will have them in mind when I make the next one or if I choose to improve "el cazador". By the way, I like the dog better than the hunter too, so I think he will be back in another episode :-)

Hernán

I like the cut-out style you have used, it has a charm. How did you do that?

I used a 2D vector-based animation software... if you move whole shapes instead of individual points that`s what you get...