I am a student with 2 months until graduation. Although this short is mostly finished, I welcome any critique, comments, or suggestions people would like to give.
http://www.rjdrag.com/DragonBrutality_s.wmv
Thanks, and enjoy.
Ryan
I am a student with 2 months until graduation. Although this short is mostly finished, I welcome any critique, comments, or suggestions people would like to give.
http://www.rjdrag.com/DragonBrutality_s.wmv
Thanks, and enjoy.
Ryan
Looks pretty good to me, nice work.
studio site: http://www.comicfiction.com
Hi rjdrag, and welcome to the AWN Forums.
I like the story and the voice acting is pretty funny as well. The animation on it is pretty flat and floaty though. The movements look very spliney and even. It would help to vary up the timing and spacing of their movements.
Aloha,
the Ape
...we must all face a choice, between what is right... and what is easy."
Yeah, I'd agree with that too. To me...the lip-syncing seems off. It might be the 'floaty' effect that is doing that, though.
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Nice, I really liked it, I dont know what the general standard is for peopel near graduation, but I would love ot be able to do osmehting like that in 4 years time!
I agree with everything that has been said so far, great voice acting, great concept, it is a bit 'floaty' at times, specially in the 'flashback' sections.