A Blue Day and Ahead of the Game

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A Blue Day and Ahead of the Game

Hi everyone,

A new guy here, hoping to make some waves. Anyway, I thought I'd start by pointing everyone to my recently finished animated shorts over on YouTube:

A Blue Day (1:30)

Ahead of the Game (1:00)

Hope you enjoy this, and post any feedback you'd like. Everything's much appreciated.

Cheers,
Jon

I really enjoyed both pieces, tremendous work.

I enjoyed both. Your concepts are clean and fresh, your background tracks appropriate. Your animation is fluid and smooth.

I couple things to consider. Looks like you are using Flash to create your work. You have a very painterly clean style. but some of the stuff is leaving behind little relics like line dots and jaggy contours. With a little more clean up your stuff could be downright poetic.

Keep it up and keep sharing. Welcome to AWN.

Pat Hacker, Visit Scooter's World.

Thanks Myron and phacker.

phacker, Yes, the plan was always to keep it very clean but due to lack of time I didn't get to clean it up as much as I would've liked. I also worked in a crazy kind of, unstructured way that I'll probably never do again that caused me to use up way too much time.

Thanks for the wonderful comments and warm welcome.