my character design..

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my character design..

I can't say that I like you're style, I'm not big on the simplistic styling though. Max Flescher started a move towards it, he has yet to be forgiven.

I think your characters are good, but you have to spend a little more time with their arcs and curves. Pretty simplicistic as they stand. But hey if you already got paid.

Pat Hacker, Visit Scooter's World.

I like the gals more than the guy with the machete.
The difference between the gals and the guys is that they have more interesting spaces between and within their shapes. The guy has a lot of spaces that are the same size ( arms and chest, head and legs) and that tends to kill his design.
He might be funnier with a bigger gut and much shorter legs for example.
I like the style though, its not too simple, but it IS simple.

The gals are ready though, some nice personality coming thru with them.

"We all grow older, we do not have to grow up"--Archie Goodwin ( 1937-1998)

thank you Ken Davis & phacker for your constructive criticism..